Memory (Welcome To The Family) p1

EDIT: page is in colour now

Here it is! Page 1 of The Outcasts: Memories. I told y'all I would post this. I know there's not much in the way of the panels-just shots of downtown Newark and a zoom in of the environment. I am really trying to incorporate more backgrounds into my panels, just to give the pages a more complete feel. There will also be more dialogue on the next page, which I will upload on Monday. And the panels' edges aren't straight because I wanted that shaky look, to convey the murkiness of memories.

So, tell me what you guys think so far. Good? Bad? Needs improvement? I would love you here your (constructive) feedback.

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